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All That's Left

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Everything's been given;
There isn't much left,
Clinging to life by one last regret.

Fighting to rise,
But have fallen so far.
Nothing, I fear, could heal these scars.

Dried, worn out hands,
They crack and they bleed.
Burning to bring me all that I need.

With Greed and Envy,
They're blind to the pain.
The human appetite can never be changed.

Grabbing and scraping,
Searching for more,
While red drops, once part of us, fall to the floor.

Continue consuming,
And with all that we take,
No matter how much we give, we can never replace.

Knowledge; acceptance.
We know what we do,
And yet we can't stop, so we just continue.

Fake a smile,
Pretend nothing's wrong.
Take my last regret, so at last I'll be gone.
I know I used to have a few friends here, but with everything going on in my life, I've become disconnected with all of them. If you're reading this, you know who you are.. and I hope you would be kind enough to answer my notes. If not, then I apologize and I wish you the best.

With that out of the way, this is the first piece I've been able to write since I started my new job. I would love any and all feedback! Even if I've learned to not expect it, lol.
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Hayleyishayley's avatar
I love your sense of rhythm.  For me the content reflects how many people are in society - beaten down, fighting and scraping amongst each other to succeed and knowing it's wrong but accepting it.